Sandwich Filling

Author:

T.C. Gardstein

$2.49

You want to fulfill a fantasy--turning thirty makes you think about what you've been missing. Personal ads sometimes turn out well, especially when you get cute with the wording. Being the filling in a delicious sandwich is just the thing to make your dreams come true.

Told in second-person, this tale brings you face-to-face with the action. A delicious fantasy.

"...Jon fiddled with his halogen floor lamp until the lighting in the bedroom was perfect: bright enough to see, yet dim enough to feel intimate. Watching the three of you embrace in front of the mirror was fantastic. You put your arms around Jon’s neck while Marc held you from behind, his hands lingering..."

~2600 words

Read our interview with T.C. Gardstein here!

Or, you may be interested in T. C.'s erotic poetry collection, "The Poetry Prostitute."

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Different but in a good way

Submitted by Leslie Lee Sanders on Sat, 04/18/2009 - 10:24pm.

I'm familiar with a handful of epublishers who won't contract first person POV let alone second person. But this is one reason I enjoy PBP . . . I finally get to read the unique experimental pieces.

I enjoyed this story, or sex scene, as it wasn't a tale but more of a one-hand read - duh. But unlike a simple one-hand read, it had a little backstory blended into the fun. Some of the words and phrases are a bit purple, but not so much to distract an aroused reader. It was fun and to the point. One thing I'd like to see is a slower pace and more detailed foreplay. Otherwise, pretty good!

Leslie Lee Sanders

The author's POV

Submitted by TCGardstein on Thu, 04/23/2009 - 7:38am.

Hi Leslie,

I'm glad you enjoyed my story. And though it's short in length and rightfully placed in the "one-hand read" category, it is indeed a story, not just an isolated sex scene. As you noted, there is a backstory. This is followed by a present-day lead-up to the actual sex, which is also part of the story because the menage a trois further illustrates each character's individual personality and style. As for the fast pace and abbreviated foreplay, you're right about that... Ms. Sandwich Filling's two virile, revved-up pieces of bread just couldn't help themselves; she was that tasty!

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"I don't want to repeat my innocence. I want the pleasure of losing it again."

--F. Scott Fitzgerald